In the sentence:
He was completely different from his older brother Trevor, the senior, straight-A quarterback football player who everyone loved… Including her.
Which would you use for the word in bold?
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http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/whoVwhVt.asp
Yes, this is how I spend my time editing. ...and completely re-writing my character's back story. But I prefer to think of it as "flushing it out"...
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